Wrote my first sci-fi short story! I would sincerely appreciate any critique and feedback.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1B_yUrgn10sAQCeoS4A1jp_MvO4OY2J_7mrTB295jcgE/edit?tab=t.0

Are the descriptions that I gave for the various setpieces detailed enough? Additionally, should I include more background about the Eagle?