Hi, I hope your day is wonderful.

Tbh, I'm not sure what I could ask here.

Although I'm a beginner artist(still studying), he's my vampire villain protagonist who has his own spotlight and works related to the occult to fight humanity in the future( dark sci-fi/military genre).

I wanna keep his background a secret. (The only thing I can tell is he's like a scapegoat, and he wants nothing but pure revenge).

Actually, screw this: The one I'm trying to write currently for my one-shot (I'm doing it for practice, it's like the side story because I wanna get comfortable, then I can make a new one for real, "I'm a beginner writer")

It's a villain with an archetype: The Social Reject, The Obsessed Scientist.

He wants to prove he's a god or something; he needs this acknowledgment because he has a bad experience from his past normal life, and as revenge, he needs to hear some compliments to make him look like a god.

In my simplified one-shot, he's gonna prove he's the god of death, but he'll do it in an unpredictable way, can't wait to actually finish it.

The design is inspired from reliogion and vampires.

For example, his helmet is inspired by a pope hat. I really like how it looks, so I added it. And to make him look like a vampire, I add bat wings.

But what do you think about his design?

Honestly, I really like my attempt to design him, and I had fun trying a different anime style that works for him.

But maybe I need some outside voices to give some tips, and if my character is likable, even though he is a villain.

And any kinda help is appreciated, this is not the final product, so I'm open to changing his look as necessary

My first OC, Kane.