[Lyrics Only] DANCE WITH MY GIRLS (Looking for collaboration/feedback)

Hi everyone, I write lyrics but I don't produce or sing. This is a melancholic alternative rock track I've been working on. I'm looking for a producer, composer, or singer to collaborate with, or just some honest feedback on the rhythm and structure. Here are the lyrics:

DANCE WITH MY GIRLS

[Intro] [Breathless whispering. short instrumental] ah... hah... ah... hah...

[Verse 1] They tell me I'm just "acting like a girl" But it’s like timelessly, my body is leaving the ground Every single time I put my headphones on The feeling inside me tonight is clearer than ever

[Pre-Chorus] Time is slowly melting in my hands Looking for a place where I can be myself The moment I find the right song [Radio Effect] All the whispers fade away

[Chorus] We exist to dance with my girls, baby Lose the rhythm, let it slide away With every single move, my charm shines so bright I’m gonna dance for my girls all through the night [Short dance Break]

[Verse 2] Walking through the Stockholm chill Well, I’m dancing like a woman, heels clicking on the beat Hear the sound of my rhythm, taking over the street The feeling inside me tonight is clearer than ever

[Pre-Chorus] Time is slowly melting in my hands Looking for a place where I can be myself The moment I find the right song [Radio Effect] All the whispers fade away

[Chorus] We exist to dance with my girls, baby Lose the rhythm, let it slide away With every single move, my charm shines so bright I’m gonna dance for my girls all through the night [Short dance Break]

[Bridge] [Slow atmospheric build up] Lights fade out... [Group Vocals] like a forgotten time* I look at my girls... [Group Vocals] like a diamond in the night No looking back now... 'Cause tonight... all I wanna do is dance in time*

[Chorus] We exist to dance with my girls, baby Lose the rhythm, let it slide away (ah...ahh) With every single move, my charm shines so bright (soo bright) I’m gonna dance for my girls all through the night (ah...ahh) [Dance Break] [Radio Effect] (Let’s dance all night, girls) Ah..ahh [Radio Effect] (Just shake your hair) Ah...ahh [Radio Effect] (Let’s dance all night, girls)

[Outro] [Instrumental fade out]