need review or honest opinion regarding this blurb i wrote a while ago!!!!1

hey all.. well i'm more like just like a begginer and writing smut for fun.. but baybe i just wanted to get a piece of adive from fellow writers about a blurb i wrote quite a while ago and wanted to improve it in orer to maybe write it ahead.. pls just write any honest review about it. tq

Vicky Diaz,

popular nerd among girls who sees no one but her

His passion for her knows no bound

but here comes a catch,

he is trapped in an unwanted marriage

and she is not only his fav "student" but also his rivals daughter

He pretends to be teacher but its only her who knows the real deal

Samaira Jane,

A carefree spirited girl who can go any lengths to get her work done

he doesn't know it yet but she is here to take his empire down

planted by her father in her enemies place

she hates him to her core cause of the past that haunts both.......

Read " HER WAR, HIS OBSESSION" to see if she wins this war or his obsession overpowers her hatred