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Her

Feedback Please

Your eyes shines,
your skin brights

You talk with every sense in your mouth,
a fat brain you've got

You can see people beneath their skin,
you think from where you stand and even in beyond

You are bound with flaws and perfection,
you are like Athena and Aphrodite combined

Underneath, you are an entity spotted with stars.
You've got a universe in your mind,
a beautiful soul i found

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/I0gQCKfeEf
https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/TxeIaKWOr1

Posted Jun 26, 2026, 3:55 AM UTC

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