Profile Audit Request: Looking for honest feedback on a Travel / Lifestyle & Aesthetics account (@mede.mede8)

Hi everyone,

I’m looking for some constructive, brutally honest feedback on my Instagram account @mede.mede8.

I focus on Travel, Micro-vlogging, and Aesthetic Lifestyle content (mostly focused on European destinations, sunsets, and cinematic moments).

Current status: ~270 followers / 16 posts.

The problem: I put a lot of effort into making my videos and photos look cinematic and high-quality, but my reach is very low, and I'm struggling to convert random viewers into followers.

What I need help with:

Bio & Positioning: Is my bio too vague? How can I rewrite it to clearly tell people why they should follow me?

Content Hook: Do my Reels start too slow? What can I do to hook people in the first 2 seconds?

Feed Structure: Does the grid look cohesive, or is it too messy for a lifestyle niche?

I'm not looking for follow-for-follow or cheap engagement. I truly want to learn how to fix my strategy and deliver better value.

Thank you so much!