[2296] Supersize Everything

I’m working on a literary novel and posted this fragment on Substack.

It’s about a girl at a piano, an American highway at night, and the feeling that some memories return only once a decade, sharp and unfinished.

Would love honest feedback on whether the voice works.

https://open.substack.com/pub/anilimili/p/supersize-everything?r=42h2b&utm_campaign=post&utm_medium=web&showWelcomeOnShare=true