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bstunz

Until You

Feedback Please

I didn’t think it would be
this hard

Walking away
No communication
Moving on

I excelled at those
Could do it to anyone
from the time I was young

Work
Friends
Family

Didn’t matter who
until you

I don’t even know
how the friendship we had
can affect me this much

Was it your voice
The way you listened

The thoughts you shared
The feelings too
Secrets you told no one
and I did the same with you
like I’ve done
with no one else

How your presence
changed me
inspired me
opened up
what I can be

my poetry

It all compiles
but maybe it’s just

your smiles

https://www.reddit.com/r/justpoetry/comments/1ugkdu8/comment/ou188ez/

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/1uck7su/comment/ou7bei9/

Posted Jun 27, 2026, 9:46 PM UTC

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