I need critiques and suggestions for my Analog Horror on YouTube

Hello everyone!

I'm a 14-year-old aspiring filmmaker interested in analog horror and experimental filmmaking. Recently, I finished my first analog horror project, What's in the Sky?, and I'd love to hear what you think.

The idea originally came from a vivid dream that stayed with me after I woke up. I wrote down everything I could remember and slowly developed it into a fictional story inspired by astronomy, old educational films, government orientation tapes, and cosmic horror.

I'm still learning, so I'm very open to constructive criticism and new ideas. I'd especially appreciate feedback on the pacing, atmosphere, editing, sound design, writing, and anything that breaks or strengthens the immersion.

This is the completed pilot, and I'd really appreciate feedback on things like the pacing, atmosphere, editing, sound design, writing, and whether the government training tape presentation feels believable.

I'm not looking for lore ideas. I already have the story planned out. I'd just like to know what works, what doesn't, and what could be improved.

Thank you for taking the time to watch it. I really appreciate any suggestions you have!

(Link: https://youtu.be/TUOIoOwCQ5c?si=PvbuJ54A95EFJ0H1)