Expressing feeling through poetry

I write ghazals so it is my first time I am saying one of my creations to any social media and I want to people judge me if I am bad so tell me I am bad but if anyone like this please share his or her feelings to me

And please read this till end because IT ACTUALLY STARTS FROM Sher-4 please 🥺 just read sher 4

Sehra-e-dhoop mein zulfon ka woh saaya to aaya,

Lab pe mere ulfat ka paigham to aaya.

Hum toh dunya ki nazron mein gumnaam hi marte,

Teri berukhi se hi sahi, thoda sa naam to aaya.

Chalo jala diya usne mere khwaabon ka aashiyan,

Kam se kam meri dunya mein koi kohram to aaya.

Aatish-e-gul mein ek phool khila mere liye bhi,

Khair teri kahani mein mera naam to aaya.

Ishq ki raah mein ruswayi mili to kya hua,

Chalo isi bahaane lab pe ye jaam to aaya.

Bhula kar mujhe woh khud bhi bahut roya hoga

Mere qatl se hi sahi, uspe koi ilzaam to aaya.

Zindagi guzar gayi jiske intezar mein 'Jaana,

Chaukhat pe uski aakhir ye maqaam to aaya