Secondary Review

Hey everyone!

I made 9 generic "Seed" essays in hopes of covering the typical generic secondary prompts most schools ask (diversity/adversity/leadership, etc.)

Would anyone mind giving them a quick read-over/review? I unfortunately don't have any peers in medicine and would really, really appreciate some feedback, even if it's only on a couple of them, as I have no idea if my writing reads as generic or boring or what 😭

Thank you so much in advance!