Wrote my first song

It's rap, wanted to know if people would listen to it and taking feedback as well before I record it in the studio:

The phone’s on DND

Cos the notifications blowing up like TNT

Gotta remind em do not distract me

Sorry, that's just how it's gotta be these days

I wanna be able to look back on dem times

And say I've been feeling great

The grind’s finally done paid off

Cuh I’m living in a crib with a gate

Eating steak 7 times a week

Cos everyday is Valentines with my girl when we go out to eat

Sometimes the local dealer wanna sell me lines

Cos he thinks my life aint been fine

Told him I dont need the ecstasy

Plus theres kids on the block, cant let em see

Not tryna set a bad example for for the young G’s in the hood

Cuh the trapping aint do no good

The phone’s on DND

Cos the notifications blowing up like TNT

Gotta remind do not distract me

Sorry, that's just how it's gotta be these days

I need more dough

Haven’t made as much Ps as I want yet

That's why I can't always pick up when she calls even though I'd like that

Could be a Bad B, could be Cardi B, I’d still decline

See the life I wanna live online so I know there's more grind to be done

Cuh I’m tryna make me a mil by 21

Should have backed crypto 6 years ago

But it since we’ve missed that boat

Just switch gears and go, there’s always more ways to make bands

Meet the right people, shake the right hands

I know I'll get there, it's just a matter of time

The phone’s on DND

Cos the notifications blowing up like TNT

Gotta remind do not distract me

Sorry, that's just how it's gotta be these days

Switch on DND, cos its the same old texts

From the bros, from my ex they wanna come over to the crib

Told em this aint no airbnb but they dont listen

It don't make sense

When was in the ends we weren't even friends

Now they act like we’re besties, gotta make sure I don't see em again

Keep life discreet stopped posting on the gram

Don’t boast on cam no more, thats unwanted attention

Got too many opps with bad intentions

360 vision but I’d make sure they won't be able to see me