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Feedback Please

You sat you found yourself in dream

You saw a monster and your heart scream

You ran they ran with you in blue

The fear you faced was always in you

You found a cave you thought you could hide

Seeing you in dispare your courage cried

He fought whole life for dispare to end

Laws of nature

you were where they bend

You tried you fried your rage in Brain

You'll meet the fate for which you'll train

The pain won't end if you think it will

It only ends if you have greater will

It scares me when the dream seems real

It scares me when it starts to feel

I want it to end and want it to fight

I want to test if i possess the might

Might i be or might i not

That's something

I would rather care not

You choose to end me id rather not

Ending will be mine happy or Not

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Posted Jul 5, 2026, 3:52 PM UTC

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