[1203] Tiffany 05

If you haven't been reading don't worry too much. Tiffany is getting a tour on her first day of college. Mandy is someone she befriended.

What I specifically am hoping for feedback on is how I am able to contrast the mental space of Mandy who thinks about things and ideas in comparison to Tiffany who thinks about people and relationships.

I also was working on crafting a sense of space for the college but ended up compressing that to speed the chapter up. Your thoughts about that would be helpful too.

##Tiffany 05

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