Hidden Desires - Unfinished Short Story [OC] Intense Imagery
Just a short unfinished scribbled story to take my mind off of work.
Down the familiar path you glide. As the darkness slowly engulfs and the haze of night dawns. Your childish fears raising your hair as you stare into abyss forming before you. Stepping back to escape, you see nothing to return to but darkness. With every step your heart leaps at the unknown. Every breath, crackle of leaf, and heartbeat, felt within your soul. Echoing the fear you are dreading.
Feeling the inevitable drawing closer, you panic to get away. But with every step your senses betray you. Your heart drawing you closer to what your mind runs from. As you are swallowed by your feelings, and your body drifts deeper under your hidden desires. Your breath quickens in your chest as you succumb to what is happening. Releasing all your tension, giving in to the passion you feel.
Deeper you glide, willingly seeking what may come for you. Until you are finally where you belong. Standing, staring, into the abyss that is calling your soul to its loving embrace. Looking deeply into the darkness, the inner you left exposed. Breathing its words deep into your inner chambers. As you quiver at the secret depths it has reached inside of you.
So where do you think the story should go from here?
Posted Jul 10, 2026, 7:28 PM UTC