Ardharaatri - The night where horror returns

Hi everyone!

I've recently started writing my first long-form horror mystery called Ardharaatri.

The story follows four friends who travel to a remote village near Bengaluru after booking a homestay. What begins as a peaceful getaway slowly turns into a nightmare when they discover the village is hiding a terrifying secret. Every night, strange rules must be followed. People disappear without a trace. The villagers perform funeral rituals for those whose bodies are never found. And an ancient temple seems connected to everything.

If you enjoy:

• Indian folklore
• Psychological horror
• Slow-burn mystery
• Supernatural suspense
• Stories with cliffhangers

I'd genuinely appreciate your thoughts. I'm especially looking for feedback on the pacing, atmosphere, and characters.

Read it here:
https://www.wattpad.com/story/413088484-ardharaatri

Thank you for your time, and I hope the story keeps you awake at night. 👀