Bronze Reinhardt VOD Review Request, Close Win, Looking for Honest Feedback to Help Me Climb

Replay code: EM1H4G

Battletag / in-game username: FluxZero

Hero(es) played: Rein

Skill tier / rank: Bronze

Map: New Queens Street

PC or console: Console

Hi everyone! I'm a Bronze Rein main looking for a VOD review to help me improve and climb. This replay was a close win, so I'm hoping it highlights both the things I did well and the mistakes that could have easily cost us the game. I'd appreciate honest, detailed feedback on my positioning, shield management, aggression versus backing up, Fire Strike usage, Shatter opportunities, target priority, cooldown and ultimate tracking, and any bad habits or decision making that is holding me back. Please don't sugarcoat it. I want to know what I'm doing wrong and what I should focus on over my next 20 to 30 games.