CASSIOPEIA - Looking for feedback on the first few chapters of my book, and would love to read other folks' work :)

Hi everyone. Would love to get some feedback on this book I've been thinking about writing forever and only started putting to paper (or keyboard) a few weeks ago. I'd love to read other members of the community's work as well if you feel like sharing. Cheers!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bkjVl1dMK04f6H2fKJWrZKcIbLpBpth54zX5wgfgHXE/edit?usp=sharing