to my father.

Feedback Please

You didnt come, you didnt do, you didnt come. Somebodys first word, the one i learned at four. You vomited me - you didnt even pour. I used to trust this more than god - you didnt come.

This lake - i fed it with my tears.

You didnt come - i milked the cow for milk.

Did you even think to come/ i never saw your fears.

Now im not falling for your bilk.

You seem happy as a little Child.

I didnt even know you when i was a child.

Your little children look perfect all the time.

I didn't see you - you never had time.

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Posted Jul 25, 2026, 7:38 PM UTC

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