[1000] In Hoping Your Offspring Becomes A Dragon

Piece: [https://docs.google.com/document/d/16YD\_ryDlNCPiT98p7bCscG6Wbvb143gpYlEmQqtG97o/edit?usp=drivesdk](https://docs.google.com/document/d/16YD_ryDlNCPiT98p7bCscG6Wbvb143gpYlEmQqtG97o/edit?usp=drivesdk)

Crit:

[https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/s/qytgY9FmdN](https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/s/qytgY9FmdN)

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/s/L14I8HvGLL

Any critiques or impressions welcomed