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sky_berry1520

A Little Longer......

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Oh, I'm lost whenever I see you,

Maybe that's just what your smile can do.

It feels like a dream when you look at me,

Those quiet stares changed something in me.

I always wish I'd look at you a little longer,

Somehow, it makes my heart grow fonder.

I love the way you meet my eyes,

Because for a moment, the whole world feels alive.

~Ash

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/OQgzGZupwd

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/4ChKjF70b4

Posted Jul 29, 2026, 1:59 PM UTC

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