Unbothered

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Sadness never bothered me.

Sadness and I walk the same worn road.

No matter where I run, so does he.

Yet all I feel within this body is myself.

We wander by the shore as the tide climbs to my feet.

So sad, I will never be.

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I’m a new-ish writer so all feedback is appreciated!!
I wrote this at a time where I was extremely sad, stressed out and just so mentally exhausted that all this sadness I had soaked up, just felt ended up feeling numb.

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Posted Jul 31, 2026, 10:04 PM UTC

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