[2413] The Fairest - Chapter 1

Hey everyone

So this is the continuation to the prologue I posted a few days ago.

Would really appreciate any and all critiques you guys might have.

As for any questions I want answered

- how is the pacing?

- how do you feel about Eira as a character now?

For context you might have to read the prologue, here is the link to the previous post:

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/s/Q9QVefRdzb

Here is the first chapter doc:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1z9az47dHqjUokOCwKbbkd6RGjOXPkkEkotfQA\_\_\_ahs/edit?usp=drivesdk

And here are my recent critiques:

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/s/cJ9uZPNCLO

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/s/AfXOSAoQjP

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/s/JofWN4laOR

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/s/0z74BgH4eg