Mary ana, my love

Feedback Please

There is a girl

who probably has no idea

that she has become a quiet chapter in my thoughts.

She doesn't know

how many ordinary school days

became memorable

because she happened to be in them.

Sometimes it's just a glance.

Sometimes it's a smile.

Sometimes it's nothing at all— and yet my heart insists

on writing stories

where reality has written none.

Maybe one day

she'll know how much courage

it takes to hide a thousand words

behind a simple "Hi."

And maybe she never will.

Until then,

she'll remain what she's always been— a beautiful possibility, living somewhere between hope and silence.

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Posted Aug 3, 2026, 10:23 AM UTC

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