Osana rewrite!!

its wofawa again! so... ever the first rewrite post I already have in mind what I wanted for my osana rewrite and remember the post I made about your opinions abt osana? This was a interactive post for you all think about my writing of her, but lets go!! I will I'll separate everything properly, unlike last time

New name!

I decide to her new name be Nishiyama Yuuri (西山友里) which can make you all think "but with ayano de initial as just like her og name Ayano Aishi" but sadly, theres no name with O who have the meaning of "friend" just like osana's name, so yuuri can have the kanji of friend if I'm not wrong.

Important thing

Raibaru doesn't exist in my rewrite, at least not in the time that my rewrite takes place, and I remove her because for WHAT my rewrite want to do, raibaru is like a "that one friend who no one calls" but raibaru was yuuri (osana) elementary school friend, so since my akademi takes place in a junior/middle school, raibaru was just a childhood friend, ironic since raibaru was to meant to be osana, but alex wanted so much osana be a hard rival, even tho she is the first and don't get me wrong, I love osana, she is my favorite rival, but raibaru sometimes is just a game mechanic than a character itself.

Backstory (just a little)

Yuuri was always very lonely because she acted very angry to things that sounds like she overeact, but in home, she was very lovely and was very calm since her home was her safe spot where she could make things that nobody in school would see. Her mom and Takashi's mom were friends so Yuuri's mom always wanted they the same, friends which was not negative in Yuuri's perspective since a friend was the best for her, but she always wanted a female friend, just like "raibaru" (her elementary school friend's nickname) so they was just "forced friends".

Week 1 things

The first thing that Ayano thinks was killing her, but after know that she was a friend of Takashi, she was thinking about make her bullied or similar things, and for this, Ayano makes a connection with Yuuri which upgrade to a frienship, days passed and Ayano stranged that Yuuri and Takashi they almost never talk, and when they talked, it was little, which was strange because if you want confess to someone, you need to me close to the person, but at the same time, Ayano was happy to have a friend, a angry, but lovely friend. In an thursday, Ayano and Yuuri as the comum, they was walking to the school, but was very hot, so Yuuri wanted a ice cream, but she was out of money, but Ayano was money so she buy the ice creams, but before Yuuri eat, she ssid

"Aikawa-chan, thank you for being my only true friend. I was very lonely before and this was killing me slowly, and Takashi? He was always busy with his friends, so I planed to confess to him that I don't want to be his friend, but you appeared and I felt so happy to have a friend... So please, in high school, don't forget me, ok?"

And after this, she eats the ice cream, but she feels her throat was closing up, and Yuuri realized she had accidentally eaten milk ice cream—something she was allergic to. She run away to her house, but in her running, she died in a front of a station beacuse of anaphylaxis. Ayano sees it the scene, and she felt guilty because she didn't know Yuuri's allergic.

That's all what I wanted to do for osana, and don't worry, maybe I will make a web novel for this rewrite for I extented somethings, like Jun and Ayano father-daughter situation, and more!!

Posted Aug 3, 2026, 2:03 PM UTC

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