Desperation...

There's this fantasy novel I have been writing( the novel is on WN sorry for posting this on RR). I am not very consistent with it but I still like writing it. There's not a single reader yet. probably because of the cover. Cause it's AI generated. I am not good at drawing and I don't have the money to pay somebody to create me one either. Also because the first few chapters are confusing and boring as f—

I got carried on with it, didn't I?😅

Anyway, the story is about a 16 year old teenager named Auralis Kayushi(Kayushi is his given name and Auralis is his family name) who is on a quest to defeat his father, Jin’Uz Auroma from conquering the world. Also, there's an entity living inside of his mind who is none other than his uncle or Auroma's elder brother, Jin’Uz Aurora.

The story is currently on its first volume and on chapter 11. So, I hope it won't be a pain in the head to review it whole if you want to.

And again, I am not forcing anyone. If you are interested then feel free to read it.

PLEASE give an honest opinion and tell me which parts I could improve and what I am doing wrong and what I am doing right. You may be as harsh as you want.

Thank you🫠