my band and I just released our second demo, thoughts? And where else can we disclose our song?

hey guys! I don't remember the last time someone posted a metal song in this sub, but anyways, we just released our second demo, wich we'll add both in our future EP. It's not 100% mastered and mixed, because we recorded everything in our homes and didn't asked for professionals to master and mix, because it's just a demo and we don't actually have enough money to record everything in studios, we also don't have enough money to keep stuff in streaming platforms, but we will put our future EP in streaming platforms when we have every song recorded. Anyways, what are your thoughts on the song and where else can we disclosure ouro songs?

When the Butterflies Keep Dying - Smiling Like Chelsea

yall can also listen to our first song on our YouTube channel