Synopsis/Excerpt:

TWs: [Rape], [DARVO], [Emotional Abuse], [Emotional Sadism], [Listener is once again a little BPD with it]

Hiya, Evie here! Took a break after falling into the White Knuckle rabbit hole :P (I was honestly thinking of making something based on Iris Castillo from some of the research notes). Still getting the hang of scripts, have a lot of half-finished ones that I’m not satisfied with it on the backburner, but I wanted to put something out without staring at it for a week trying to make it perfect (as such the flow might be a little weird, didn’t proofread it too much after a few rewrites so I wouldn’t obsess over it). 

I’ve been trying to write more “actually” mean speakers lately, and this one was supposed to be a girl taking advantage of someone with attachment issues (author may or may not have a cluster B personality disorder). This speaker in particular is a bit heavy-handed in her meanness, but I had a little devil on my shoulder (a beta-reader, that is) egging me on to keep making her meaner, lol. I also want to write more sub speakers but it’s a lot harder to express what’s happening from that pov (and it’s also a bit embarrassing at times). As always, please let me know how it reads, if you liked it, any gripes or concerns, etc!

Additional/flavor tags: [Slapping] [Spit in Mouth] [Spit on Face] and [Forced to Swallow Spit] [Degradation] [Dehumanization] [Breathplay], [Negging], [Taller & Stronger Speaker], [Really Mean Speaker], [Emotionally Dependent Listener], [Sour, Then Sweet], [But Mostly Sour], [Staging a Fight Just Because I Want To See You Cry], [I Didn’t Mean It Though, Prommy], [Wish Fulfill-y] , [Please do not ask your situationship] “[So, what are we?]”, [This Will Not Happen To You]

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So, what are we? (3200~ words)

Inclusivity notes: feminine terms are used for the listener, though descriptions of the speaker are scarce. Alt has been provided for the speaker having a cock or vulva. No physical descriptions are given of the listener directly, other than being smaller and weaker than the speaker. The speaker refers to the listener affectionately as “dork,” and degradingly(?) as a “puppy”, “bitch”, “mutt”, “toy”, “freak”, etc. as well as (definitely degradingly) “garbage”, “slut”, “rapebait”, and “cocksucker”/”carpet muncher”. The speaker also refers to the listener as “pretty” and “perfect”.

Consent notes: Consent is never given explicitly, and the listener seems to implicitly resist. This lack of consent is highlighted by the speaker repeatedly, and purposefully ignored.

As per usual, any feedback is welcomed, especially by prospective fillers!

~ ‧₊˚❀༉‧₊˚. All the best,

Evie <3. 𓇢𓆸

(btw, the name is pronounced E-V-blossoms, like evie-blossoms)