Winters revenge

This is my first two chapters for Winter's revenge. A father ripped from his family desperate to reunite. Set in the far future on a foreign planet.

I've added the Google doc link for my first two chapters. Please feel free to critique, be honest, nasty, mean, or nice I'll take any feedback.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/14Dv4U5bgGl7hidyY1gEluIDRbt1Ef2VC2fzS-BR3tdw/edit?usp=drivesdk