Help with chapter

I’ve been working on the book for about a month and a half and I’m finally admitting defeat. I’ve been through the book so many times and at this point I’m sure I’ve crossed out or highlighted I shouldn’t have any I have so many marks it’s become too confusing. 😔

Would anyone be able to DM me the correct chapter so I can finally solve this? I’ll try again myself with the new version and not make the same mistakes I did this time. It’s just becoming too frustrating for me.