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QUICK FIXES - Short - 28 Pages

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Title: Quick Fixes

Format: Short

Page Length: 28

Genre: Comedy Drama

Logline: After their group project goes missing the night before the deadline, four frenemies are forced to work together as they try to recreate it by morning in order to graduate.

Feedback Concerns: Very very much a "vomit draft", just had to get the base of the story on the page. Character motivations and such are certainly still missing a throughline in places. Interested in whether or not the ending really works? The finishing beat is likely to stay but is it justified here?

Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/13fyW2Kd\_4Q68r8\_80AybRC1lkbnbNRuU/view?usp=drivesdk

Thank you very much!

Posted Aug 11, 2026, 11:35 AM UTC

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