How can I improve my movie essay?

I enjoy writing reviews/essays on films I've watched. I usually keep them to myself, but this time I thought I'd ask for advice. So feel free to read it and tell me what I can improve, really anything. I would love to get better at writing and I want to hear your thoughts on my review. It just contains my thoughts on the movie. (Also spoilers for the movie "Steve" - 2025)

.https://docs.google.com/document/d/1T-8BInyPx8iM19aTT5OvH4QMK4I8NWEDtPVOcl6S-xM/edit?usp=drivesdk