Asking for feedback on my WIP.

Hi, I’m asking for any type of feedback.

I started this project a couple of years ago, and have been procrastinating ever since.

The story is about a man with psychosis named Juliet Graves. He going around killing people who he believes have harmed him in the past all while having to hide everything from his housemates (girlfriend, friend, and daughter). He questions his morals and understanding of reality as he begins to loose himself.

Here is the prologue: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-qzmeE46p1GKTxAocfvD4EiF5SMK4TCxEQwWv-mIGdo/edit?usp=drivesdk

By the by, I did revise this a little already, and I’m hoping to finish this and get it published.