My WIP.

Hi, I’m asking for as much feedback as possible on my work in progress, To Light The Match.

Story: A man, Juliet Graves, doesn’t realize he has psychosis as he goes around taking the lives of those who he believes have harmed him in the past all while having to hid everything from friends and family. He begins to question his morals and reality itself, yet he still tries to get his job done.

Here is the prologue: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-qzmeE46p1GKTxAocfvD4EiF5SMK4TCxEQwWv-mIGdo/edit?usp=drivesdk