Batman Original Story

Hello, I am new and not sure if this is the right place but I'll try. I'm attempting to create my own Batman comic and I would appreciate some feedback if someone is open to read it. I have already made the script for almost 30 scenes (around 150 pages). I will send a short summary of what the story is about without revealing anything and feel free to contact me if you would like to read, thank you. Batman: Second Chances

Twenty years.

The same faces.

The same failures.

Gotham’s criminals keep coming back stronger, better equipped, and harder to stop. Batman has spent two decades putting them away… only to watch them return.

Something has changed.

Something is feeding the cycle.

A new investigation begins when a low-level villain appears with technology that shouldn’t exist. What starts as another night in Gotham quickly becomes something far more dangerous — and far more personal.

Batman. Nightwing. Robin. Oracle.

The family is drawn into a mystery that has been hiding in plain sight for decades.

This is a story about obsession, failure, and the price of second chances.