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Kyannaaa

help with wording please?

I'm trying to express that the early morning light made the birds kind of glow golden....

"The early morning light turned the white belly of a Crested Tern golden, and glowed on an Albatross"

Does the light glow "on" the albatross or "off" the albatross?

Posted Aug 13, 2026, 4:36 PM UTC

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