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Superior Rebirth is a science-fiction mystery/action story about Alexander Reinhardt, a brilliant but morally gray scientist whose controversial Project Rebirth could fundamentally change the future of humanity.

After an attack at his laboratory leaves Alexander dead, Project Rebirth is accidentally activated, causing his consciousness to survive inside the body of a girl named Alexandra Wilson.

Now presumed dead and living a new life in a body that isn't his, Alexander must adapt to his new identity while searching for those responsible for his death and the theft of Project Rebirth.

I'm currently working on the first chapter and would really appreciate feedback on the rough draft.

I'm especially interested in feedback on:

Does the opening hook you?

Does Alexander feel like an interesting protagonist?

Does the transition from Alexander to Alexandra work?

Is the pacing too fast or too slow?

Do the school/character scenes feel natural?

Does the mystery make you want to keep reading?

Are there any parts that feel confusing, forced, or overly cliché?

I'm still developing some of the story details, so I'm open to changing things if something isn't working.

Content note: The story contains violence, an assassination, and death.

Thanks to anyone who takes the time to read it and give feedback. I appreciate both positive and critical feedback.

Looking for feedback on my sci-fi mystery/action story, Superior Rebirth