Is there some place i can get feedback on my writting?

I used to DM dnd for a long time for friends a few years ago and over the years I came up with a lot of original scenarios and ideas, but I never tried my hand in writing an actual story before. Recently I decided to do just that, but since I am used to describing scenes and places as a narrator. I would like to know if readers are usually open to that kind of narrator heavy exposition instead of a first person one, also while for me the dialogue feels natural and a few friends I talked with seemed to think it was okay, I still would like more opinions on it. 

so, i wonder if there is a place i can sharethe first chapter of the story, just to see if its good enough and is something people would be interested in reading.