How's my pronunciation at 1-2 months in?

I decided to try learn pronunciation first, before actually understanding the words themselves.
This is after approximately 1.5 months of learning.

Is it even slightly passable? I'm assuming I've broken the sentences up incorrectly as I don't understand the meaning. But how are the sounds?

Goal is to get as good as possible without immersion (I live in Australia).

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aB_PBBucLg0