THE VAMP - First Script

I wrote my first script as a junior in high school in about 3 weeks. Deeply personal story.

Title: The Vamp

Short feature

54 pages

Genre: Coming of age/drama/comedy

Logline: During a three-week summer camp for gifted youths, a nerdy teen filmmaker has until the final night of camp to confess his feelings to his crush while navigating a series of romantic fumbles, a rival suitor, and his friends' chaotic advice

Looking for thoughts and feedback. Be honest and in depth, please :)

Link: file:///Users/steelewyndham/Documents/The%20Vamp%20first%20full%20draft%20corrected.pdf