[1777] 01 Tiffany the Werewolf

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This is not related to my last project, I just stuck with the same character name. This is more homework than anything else. I am trying to write using the Scene and Structure as a rule. So you see the chapter divided into a table. The left column is the scene or sequel I wrote before writing. Feel free to ignore that if you don't care.

Things I think I would need to revise is being more disciplined in POV and the ratio of scene to sequel. Is it too much internal monologue?

01 Tiffany the Werewolf