Hi all. Sorry for jumping in here; I promise it won't take long. Can you please read this Medium story I created? I want to know if the desired emotion I want to evoke is felt after reading it. It's 3 mins read only

I promise this is not a paid website. You won't pay to read it. I just want you to come back to this post and reply, "Yes" if the desired feeling of "self-confidence" is felt, or "No" if you did not feel it.

Even better if you could add a short explanation, but it won't be necessary.

I'm doing this to improve my storytelling skills so that I can also market it online and earn a few extra. I'd really appreciate all the help.

Here is the story link.

Thank you so much.