Threads - Feature - 94 pages

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Title: Threads

Format: Feature

Page length: 94 pages

Draft: First

Genre: Crime/Comedy

Logline: Two friends spend one night getting hunted by an entire gang, seemingly over a box of shirts nobody should give a damn about.

Script: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Qb-bXlXNbnwWKwayi7iEqKtFkO8RR0q7/view?usp=drivesdk

Feedback concerns: I am planning to self produce and direct this film, so any feedback would be much appreciated. Please tell me how the plot is in general as well as formatting concerns. I already posted this once and got 2.5k views but no feedback, might as well try again. Thank you so much!

Posted Sep 6, 2026, 3:15 AM UTC

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