problem > solution > MVP > landing page > then what ?

I came across a very old problem which has some solutions but I still felt few gaps which leads me to build a solution.

The Question: If tomorrow never came, would your family know where your accounts are, what is owed, or what's monthly Money Flow to keep the lights on ?

Existing Solutions: Family Binder or House Hold Binder
problem with existing solution is that it is offline only, risk of missing it and may not have upto date data and hard to analyse data easily. house fire like situation may lead to loosing it.

New Solution: Worth Diary works online, store data in user's Google drive only, provides analytics and reminder to money flows, know your average monthly cash flow easily and get reminders to pay it. Data can be shared in Google drive via PDF automatically so trusted contacts who can access it without touching app.

Landing page link in comment if needed.

So my questions :

1. Does this landing page explain problem & solution clearly ?

2. Will it convince someone to register in waitlist for discount?