Feeback needed on my pilot screenplay for my series

I've been writing a pilot episode for my slice-of-life series based on seven sinners in purgatory. They're all anthro plushies, and the series is called Project Plush Purgatory. The script is meant mainly for the voice actors, as this animatic will be voiced. I've been trying to get more critical feedback to make things funnier and more interesting.

Here's the link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1chwZqWVVaU1EJYKKtS-UIUn92CvHSx4Ftit2et5CIAk/edit?usp=sharing