Writing a story about an asian stud getting shrunk - any advice? (23m)

Basically, there's not enough erotica about cocks getting shrunk. I have a few story ideas, but this first one is about an alpha who gets his manhood shrunk to a nub.

1. introduce Daniel, 21 8.5"x6.5" veiny uncut 3rd year Chinese stud, known for purposefully getting white girls to cheat on their bfs with him. into breeding.

1.5 Daniel had a growth spurt at 18 and grew from 5" at 18 to his current size. (he still has no sympathy for small dicks because he's an asshole)

2. White frat boys decide to get revenge on him

3. They get him super drunk at a party and give him "a ride home" but take him to the frat and tie him up when he passes out

4. they tried to put the cage on while he was out but he kept getting hard so the cage didn't fit, even ordered an XXL one for him

5. no choice but to milk his cock, they call over a 3" gay fag and get him hard. They measure him, take pictures, and say it's for a surprise later. The fag milks him until he blows a fat load into a measuring cup, but he still stays hard after the first load. Then, the fag gets his reward by using Daniel's monster cock as a dildo for the second load (creampie). He finally gets soft after that.

6. monster finally gets caged, they force feed him estrogen and milk his prostate to make the shrinking quicker. His cock is so big it cracks the plastic but it can't break out. That’s the last time he’ll be that big.

7. frat brothers (all smaller than him) use his throat and formerly virgin ass while he's tied up

8. keep him for three days, downsizing his cage every day and starving his muscles. The fag milks him with gloves four times a day using estrogen cream as lube.

9. Day 1: His cock looks sore and the veins have gone purple. 7.0"x6.0"
   Day 2: The shrinking has really begun. All the veins that made his cock monstous look hideous now, bunched up and swollen. 5.0"x5.0"
   Day 3: His nub could fit inside his former dick's head. Barely looks like a dick, incredibly shrivelled with all of the old skin. 2.5"x4.0"

10. They finally decide to release him. The pictures they took before were to order a dildo for him that was his old cock, 8.5"x6.5". They bring it out to fuck him with his own former cock before he whimpers out his last load, cumming from his own (former) size

11. after he cums, they unlock the nub cage and bring the frat bros to compare with his new cock. They all beat him and the 3" gay fag isn't interested in him anymore.

12. they make him watch as they delete the pictures of his former cock. he never took dick pics so all traces of his former glory are permanently gone. probably infertile now