I need help

Y'all I have a 4-panel comics to do that is due on for college. This is the only sub I know that can write lines. I have a scene I decided to draw. It is based on my 2 OCs. A donghua style comic of a king and a dancer.

Basically, I want it to be angst and fantasy.

My concept would be one of them is dying but they can't stop it for some reason. Maybe some sort of illness that he did try to cure but couldn't. So they keep turning back time just to keep meeting them again. Maybe to save them but more just to see them again.

He also makes this small statues of her in every regression.

the twist is they are doomed from the start. Everytime she's with him, her lifespan get shorter. It's the consequences of his power. The most important person to him will be the cause.

....then maybe he lets go in the end or

all this time, the girl knew too. She also has her past memories. But instead of running... She stays where they first met everytime.

Now I NEED the MOST devastating lines for these. And short narrative. Then I can try to figure out how to draw them. If y'all wanna see the ocs, I can put them here. And yes, this is for my college work. I go to art school.

I don't actually need to put this much effort but eh, I'm already here. I'm committed. I even have a playlist for this.

Sorry for the long post btw.