The Confining Construct

Just Sharing

There was a Time in my life where I tried to undermine

The lies in my mind

Time being spent tryna justify

Asking myself who’s this guy

Time to get rid of the disguise

Now I’m left with this persona

Who lost his sense of self due to corona

Isolated but not at home

Doing shrooms dropping acid

Went from being avid

To my ego collapsin

So when they ask if I been slipping

Yeah I have been

Forced to fight the feeling

Born to write words that cause healing

So I picked up the pen

Becoming an addict

To be a man amongst men

Puttin my heart and pride on these sheets of paper

I’m finna Break the stereotype and become a different type of landscaper

One who cuts and trims the letters to fit better

On this piece of paper

That I call a love letter

I APPRECIATE anyone who took the time to read through that! Always wanted to take this one to an open mic but I always chicken out. I’ve been writing poetry since I was a kid, never really took any classes for it but I’ve always just kept writing through the years. I’m now 23 and I feel like this is my best piece of work yet but I love getting perspectives so I would like to know what yall think!

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Posted Sep 29, 2026, 2:22 AM UTC

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