14 y/o, complete beginner. Little piece I’m working on.

been reading a lot of Stephen king and thought to myself ‘shit maybe I should give this a go’ yes I know Im waffling a lot in the writing but do you know what a pain it is to edit. let me know if this is complete shit or actually something.

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