Started a business-feedback welcomed

Taking the leap and started a business! Would love any feedback on the elevator pitch if there are any business owners out there with employees receiving health insurance/on a PEO.

The business is a PEO brokerage. The elevator pitch is, I help businesses shop the PEO market without having to go through five different sales pitches. I gather the information once, take it to multiple PEOs, compare the pricing, benefits, workers’ comp, HR support, and technology side by side, and help the business choose the best fit. Essentially, I act as an independent advisor for the client instead of representing just one PEO.

I don’t know many people who do this, and it’s difficult to compare notes when you’re on your own. Let me know if you see value in this or not. Would love to connect with anyone doing something similar.